Friday, February 17, 2012

ch. 2 page 14 (welcome to the world)

Jacob I am so going to kill you. Why babe because you got me pregnant. Here is your beautiful daughter. Renesmee, Jacob meet you daughter. Jacob honey I am sorry. You were just a little hormonal and i forgive you. What are we going to name her Solaine Isabelle Black. It fits her fine. Everyone i like you to meet our daughter. Oh sweetheart she looks like you and gots Jacob's hair color. Edward meet your granddaughter. I feel old. Oh shut dad. Jacob you did good. Take care of these lovely young ladies. I will Edward thanks for everything. no problem jacob.

Friday, February 10, 2012

character list

Edward & Bella's Kids
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Renesmee Cullen
Electric Cullen- Adopted daughter
Sydney Cullen
Andrew Cullen

Jasper & Alice's Kids
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Cameron Hale
Jazlyn Hale

Emmett & Rosalie's kids
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Jagger Cullen
Lexi Cullen

Embry- loves Sydney
Alec loves Electric
Seth- loves Jazlyn
Dylan-loves Solaine
Quil- loves Carleigh
paul- loves Mackenzie
cameron loves jane

these people come in the story later

Solaine is Jacob & Nessie's baby
carleigh is solaine's & dylan's daughter
Mackenzie is seths & Jazlyns daughter

ch.2 page 13 kidnapped

Renesmee are you here. Shit that must mean the Voltori has her. they means we have to go there and save her and the baby before they kill them both. we can't allow that. we got to go after them and save them. Alright Jacob you distract both Aro, & Cauius. Alice, Emmett, Rose, & Jasper get Marcus, & Felix. Daddy help. Nessie where are you in the conference room. I am coming baby hang on. Daddy your here of course I am. Are you alright sweetie. Yes I think so. Bella take her to Carlisle. Daddy where is Jacob. he is killing the Voltori. Ok, and your aunts & uncles to. They are all dead. Except Jane, and Alec. Don't worry we want to be on the good side. Alright it is settle you two can come with us.

Thursday, February 9, 2012

ch.2 page 12

We are back. I am glad you are home both of you. Mom will you call everyone in here. be glad to. Attention Everyone Jake and me have some news. I'm Pregnant. You what. I am literally going to kill him now. Dad please don't. Edward you remember when we had her. Yeah dad when you and me had me. Well I need to talk to jacob. Do you even know what you are getting in to. Remember when bella was with her. Yes and knowing your daughter who is my wife is just like her mother. I suppose so. You know i will take care of her.
I know.
Mom do you think my father killed my husband. no baby girl he is just talking to him. It will be alright.

ch. 2 page 11 (the honeymoon)

Jake where are we going? That is a surprise. no fair i want to know because i hate to wait. it want be to much longer. OK. If you are tired you can lay on me on the plane. That is not a bad idea i am pretty tired. I bet after the wedding and the planing it. We are here babe. Really where are we. we are in Hawaii. oh my gosh how did you know i wanted to come here. i overheard you telling your cousin.Well you need to quit eavesdropping. it want happen again. well what am i going to do with you Jacob. don't know but i am going to build sandcastles. you coming. yeah. kicks sand at him. you are going to get it Mrs. black. well come after me slowpoke. slowpoke. yeah what are you going to go about it. how about we got to the hotel Jake i am tired. OK but we are going there bridal style. the next morning: babe are you alright. no i think not. Jake i think i am pregnant. I went to the gift shop while you were swimming, and took it and it said positive. I mean all the signs are there. You mean i will be a daddy. Yes dipstick.

ch.2 p.10

Jacob, Nessie I am sorry about what I did. Could you forgive me. Sure we will right jake. Yes all is forgiven Leah. Thanks for inviting me to the wedding. Your welcome.
Time to cut the cake. Don't you dare Jacob Black. I won't. smeares it in her face. that its and she smears it in his. Now its time for the bride and groom dance, which was god gave me you. Alright daddy its time for our dance. i suppose so and my little girl is playing. you will always be my little girl. I know . Time for the pictures and presents. Nessie, Jake we have something we like to give you. heres the keys to your new home. Oh thanks mom and dad. your welcome nessie. Thanks bella and edward no problem. Alright ladies time for me to throw the bouquet Jazzy getting married next. and seth caught the garter. bye everyone thanks for comming.

ch.2 page 9

Alright everybody lets get this over with. Alright lets have sydney, electric, Lexi, Jazzy. Andrew the ringer barrier comes out first. Then followed by Sydney & Embry, Electric & Cameron, Lexi & Jagger and Jazzy & Seth. Then followed by Edward & Nessie.
Everybody is at their places. Who gives this women to be married to this man? Her Mother and I do. Let us proceed do you Jacob Black take this women to be your lawful wedded wife to have and to hold for richer and poorer in sickness and in health for long as you both shall live. I do. And do you Renesmee Cullen take this man to be your lawful wedded husband to have and to hold for richer and poorer in sickness and in health for long as you both shall live. I do. The rings please. Thank you. Jacob repeat after me, Renesmee with this ring I thee wed. Renesmee with this ring I thee wed. Jacob with this ring i thee wed. By the power invested in me I now pronounce you husband and wife you may kiss the bride. Ladies & Gentlemen I now present to you for the first time Mr. & Mrs. Jacob Black.

Ch.2 page 8 The wedding

Today is my wedding day. Mom do you think dad will behave, if not i will get uncle emmett on him. I become Mrs. Renesemee Black and I can't wait. You look stunting. Thanks Aunt Alice and Aunt Rose. Can I come in. Sure daddy. Ladies can we have a moment please. Sure Edward. Renesmee I have watched you grow up from a baby to a young women. you look like your mom everyday. As bad as I hate to say it I am glad I am giving you to a great man. Dad I know how you feel, just because jacob will be my husband that don't change the fact your my father and my protecter. I mean i need someone to stay with when he is gone. I understand sweetheart. I Love you daddy. I know baby. Daddy what? will you share a dance with me? sure what song? my little girl you got it kiddo.
are you still walking me down the isle. Of course.

p.7

But I don't want to go to do wedding planing. Why not Jakey? Because I am guy and that is more of a girl thing. Oh I see you don't care. Babe I care about you but not on wedding things. Ok I forgive you but you need to get your act together and get a tux and your groomsman together. Alright i will I Love You

Saturday, February 4, 2012

pg.6

so i guess your not mad nessie. not at you at least, i am ticked off that leah was trying to get my soon to be husband. i know you are. I can't wait til you are my wife. so guess your butt in gear and lets take off plan together. I think your father still wants to rip my head off. only because i was his before you. he just didn't want me to get hurt.

pg. 5

you son of bitch you are cheating on my daughter with leah. no edward she kissed me and i know you saw it. Dad please let me talk to my fiance please. Jacob what the hell is going on. like I told your father she kissed me. Well for some reason I believe you. She is just a person who wants you but can have.